"Heartbeats and Wild Things"
How many more times will this pain kill me, until I am finally dead?
My ribs hurt from heartache,
And the poison inside me make my lungs suffocate.
How long till he keeps throwing punches…
inside my soul, leaving holes?
How long?
FOR HOW LONG!!
Because I can’t breathe.
I can’t live like this anymore. ♡
© Fiona Crystal • April 29, 2018 | 8:03 AM
Fiona Diaries — ‘Heartbeats and Wild Things’ • All rights reserved
Art Attribute: ©Victoria Siemer @witchoria 'Let the dark in'
Wow this is a powerful poem indeed, it made me feel sad when I read it I feel like there was so much raw emotion behind the words.
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Thank you so much!
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Oh man, it sounds like you are in so much pain right now. Such an emotional poem , I hope you find some comfort soon and your pain eases.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I was in a deep pain when I wrote it XOXO
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This is very deep! Love the combination of the words and the photo. Definitely brings to mind sadness and pain that is very real! Wow.
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Thank you so much!
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Aw I hope things are looking up for you! My heart hurts for you because I have been there before! I’ve felt that kind of pain and it really sucks!!
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Thank you!
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In a few words you have described so many powerful emotions,it feels pain through words.
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Thank you! I really wanted to write it in as less words as I could lol
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This is so sad but beautiful at the same time, I can relate from my darker times. I agree that the art work really suits the poem too.
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Thank you hun XO
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I can feel the pain and the frustration from this poem. The picture really match the poem well.
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Thank you! I was in pain when i wrote thing ❤
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Wow! This is powerful!
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Of course!
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what an amazing and thought provoking poem . absolutely sweet and touching.well done.
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your kind words ❤
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I don’t think there are any words I could say to express how much emotion you have built up with such few words. This is so beautifully crafted.
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